project #3 macro

Critique

Critique

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  Adachi, Ethan (Action) :I enjoyed seeing the contrast in your live action photo you really captured the small waterfall. It was very impressive how you could still get a lot of good detail in the live action photo, buy contrasting of the green on the top of the water it was a good idea. It really made the photo stand out, It helps keep your eye moving. I would recommend to try to go in deeper and really try to get shots of things that most people can see. Your macro photos has a very sharp ton to it at the same time the water gives it a 3D look to it. Good job getting a lot of detail out even though the background and the focus point of your photo are the same color.
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  Aquino-Robles, Lindsey (landscape) :I really liked your landscape photo. I really loved how you used the parking lot to your advantage and made the mountains and the clouds stand out, and you don't just lose yourself in the clouds. the trees also look good it gives you layers. there is a lot going one in the photo but you can still distinguish every thing. I would of liked if you could of made the rainbow stand out a little more by sharpening the colors or maybe toning down the surrounding areas, but other than that the photo is very mesmerising.
• Carpenter, Taj (landscape) :The photo that really caught my eye was your landscape photo.  You did a really good job avoiding competing lines in the round. What really caught my eye was the sunrise and how you could still see the bird's wings, and how you could still see most of the detail of the trees and how the sunrise didn't take over the majority of the photo and you used it to your advantage. One thing i would keep my eye out for would be the glare that the car left in the bottom right. Maybe next time you can edit that part out or make it blend in a little more.

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